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One of the first photos I took with my new graduated neutral density filter.
Image size
3318x2212px 2.17 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3100
Shutter Speed
20/1 second
Aperture
F/29.0
Focal Length
30 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 26, 2014, 4:48:59 PM
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Arctic--Revolution's avatar
Hello,

I'm from the critique for critique page.  :)  I really like this photo a lot.  It stood out to me more than many of the other photos on the page.  The effects on the water, whether it was done via long exposure only or a combination of photoshopping techniques, were done very well.  It almost creates a dreamlike effect.  The only thing that is somewhat throwing me off in the picture is the rock in the bottom right hand corner.  To me it just seems distracting.  Like you have the dreamlike water above and then there's just this static looking rock sitting there haha.  I love the photo, but my advice would be to photoshop the rock out using the clone tool to duplicate more of the rocks in the water that you have on the left side and take them all the way across to the right side, which would blend in better.  Or another thing you could do is retake the photo, which I know would be a hassle, and move the camera to another position without something as static as that rock.  Hope any of this helps my friend.  :D

-Zach